enchanted_eve (enchanted_eve) wrote in build_a_story,

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Story Idea

I'm new to this community but I think it's a great idea. Heres an opening paragraph to something I've been working on. I'm curious to see how it goes.

She leaned back feeling the rough bark against her skin. She pressed harder, drawing strength from the discomfort. She stared at her hands, wondering how so much had slipped through her fingers. In her minds eye, she could still see his face. The smile she loved so much, when he looked at her with desire. And the angry frown, eyes condemning, on the day he left her. Her heart tore to think that she had lost him. And all over something so stupid. She was sorry now, now that it was too late. But she hadn't been sorry then, when she'd done it...
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